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Promise... by *luvd-n-hated:iconluvd-n-hated:

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Promise me you’ll be there
When I fall down in the dirt.
And you’ll be there with a bandaid
Every time that I get hurt.

Promise me you’ll love me
Through the good times and the bad.
You’ll love me when I’m happy
But also when I’m sad.

Promise me you’ll love me
When I’m fat and when I’m thin.
And when I lose my place
And I have to start again.

Promise me you’ll be there
Every time that I’m in need.
That you’ll love unconditionally
And never make me plead.

Promise me you’ll love me
And you’ll never break my heart.
That you always will protect me
Until death do us part.
©2008-2010 *luvd-n-hated
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I was at work today and this just popped into my head... my boss told me it was pretty good so I decided to put it up. Tell me what you think!

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:icontoranih:
~Toranih Mar 26, 2008, 5:17:54 AM
Very nice. :-)

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*luvd-n-hated Mar 27, 2008, 3:57:53 AM
thank you =)

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:icontoranih:
~Toranih Mar 27, 2008, 12:53:06 PM
You're welcome. :-)

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~Lalamags Mar 13, 2008, 3:31:57 PM
Wow! I really like your rhyme scheme and the whole feel of this. Nice work!
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*luvd-n-hated Mar 13, 2008, 11:01:30 PM
thank you very much! =D :hug:

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~flyingPieOfDeath Mar 12, 2008, 4:35:03 PM
This is really good! I really like how it flows, it's almost song-like.

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*luvd-n-hated Mar 12, 2008, 4:47:08 PM
thanks so much! and thanks heaps for the :+fav:!

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~flyingPieOfDeath Mar 12, 2008, 4:50:29 PM
I fav what I like, and I liked your poem =P

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*luvd-n-hated Mar 12, 2008, 4:56:23 PM
:hug:

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~MyStIc-09 Mar 10, 2008, 10:10:15 AM
wow, it's beautiful. :)

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